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- You have written in detail about the specific technologies you have used and given specific and relevent examples.
- You have thought carefully about the representation of the young woman (though more detail is needed)
- Good SPAG
-Some attampt to create supervisual posts.
EBI
- You should refer to specific scenes/shots and use media terminology e.g. specific shot types when you discuss representation. What does a low or a high angle do to the way she is represented?
- You should include more detail when writing about your target audience, consider also the interests of your audience. Create a profile of your 'ideal' audience member. What do they like to do? What do they buy? How often do they go to the cinema and who with?
- Be more specific regarding how you have constructed the representation of the young woman. See Ms Jarrett's 'Girl With the Dragon Tattoo' example in class.
Remember you will need all your posts to be supervisual, think about how you can do this. I would like you to go beyond prezi and images, I would like you to create a voice over commentary or a mini-documentary to reach level 4.
EFFORT - VG
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