Peer Assessment - Evaluation

Peer Assessment - Killing Jennifer Draft 1

Assessment of Evaluation posts for Q. 3 and 4 (SJA Feb 14th)

WWW:

• Looking over your blog, I am pleased that you have made a really good start on all Evaluation questions Matt
• There are some good attempts to make posts visual in some way, and your written comments show a generally good grasp of what each question requires of you
• Your work for Q. 4 is really good, I think the 'profile' is a really good way of exploring who your target audience possibly is. Well done for this post.

EBI:

• To improve, and move that standard of your work towards a B-A grade, you should come back to your posts and continue to develop them.
• I checked Q. 3 and 4 carefully, as these were the 2 that we agreed on in last Monday's lesson. There are some developments that I'd like you to do to improve Q. 3
• Q. 3 is currently Very Good. You have investigated a range of distribution companies and shared thoughtful reasoning about why you decided on the company you selected. I think this post could be moved to 'Excellent' through the inclusion of screen grabs from your own film sequence compared to similar films released by the same distribution company - your written comments should explain what they share in common, and why your film is best suited to the company you selected

Overall effort for Q. 3 and 4: VG

Teacher Assessment (Draft 1) Killing Jennifer